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Rainy Day In June by JonUriah Rainy Day In June by JonUriah
The year is 1883. You find yourself looking out of a window in your father's cabin, waiting for the rain to stop. Puddles fill the old dirt path leading from the cabin and into the forest. The air smells of rain and birds can be heard in the trees as the rain finally begins to come to a slow trickle. 

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The dark, wooded background makes the perfect setting for this weathered glimpse of history; however, I might have considered employing either a more angled shot, to lend it a bit more drama, or considered utilizing an antiquing filter or effect, to make the image seem like it was stolen from the past. Additionally, the overall darkness of the photo obscures some of the details of the wonderful craftsmanship employed in building this cabin, leaving it standing, still, after all these years. Perhaps a "paint with light" darkroom technique could be employed to selectively highlight the cabin? I almost wish there were a face in the dark window...
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Lormet-Images Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2015  Professional Interface Designer
Lovely photo! :)
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abdallahalmalik Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
It has a, "perpetual dawn," atmosphere that almost makes it look like it's in Europe.
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JonUriah Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2015  Professional Photographer
Europe is on my "to-visit" list. :)
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abdallahalmalik Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Be careful if you go to the UK, lacking a constitution they can arrest you based on personal opinion ^.^
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justmejel Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2015

I decided to learn to draw. I particularly like land and seascapes. I used this picture as inspiration. If you want me to remove it from my gallery I will. Thank you for sharing your art.

 

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JonUriah Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2015  Professional Photographer
A very nice start! :)
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justmejel Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2015
thanks.

You wouldn't believe how many things I've drawn/sketched that are just sitting in a folder or sketch pad that will never see the light of day... Or maybe you would, you have an awesome gallery, thanks Jon.
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JonUriah Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2015  Professional Photographer
You're very welcome. :) Thank you for drawing it.
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AVtheCreeper Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, wow! Your shots are just beautiful. The fade, lighting effect, is gorgeous! It's not too exposed. The focus is well made (manualy done or not), and I like the fact that you gave importance to the atmosphere, around the cabin, as well.
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:iconjonuriah:
JonUriah Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2015  Professional Photographer
Thank you!
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AVtheCreeper Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
C= any time
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AlexSkullUterna Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2015
awesome
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JonUriah Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2015  Professional Photographer
Thank you!
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Agness-flower Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful place with the climateLove 
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:iconjonuriah:
JonUriah Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2015  Professional Photographer
Thank you!
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JEEPhade Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Beautiful. This would also be amazing with a sepia tone treatment added.  You have a wonderful collection of images!
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JonUriah Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2015  Professional Photographer
Thank you!
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slowdog294 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2015  Professional General Artist
Perfect post work. I would say this is as good as it gets. :nod:
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:iconjonuriah:
JonUriah Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2015  Professional Photographer
Thank you! Although no extra work has been done to the photograph. Was checking out an issue that I was having the source file. All is good though. :)
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slowdog294 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015  Professional General Artist
This is a perfect example of exposure/postwork. Also, the composition is first rate, with the camera angle and point of view bringing out lots of detail in this shadowy abode...
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Demon57 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Home :heart:
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Suchacommotion Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Oh my gosh yes uwu 
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amirmugi Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2015
the cabin, the forest really suits well
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JonUriah Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2015  Professional Photographer
I will one day build a cabin like this. :)
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slowdog294 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2015  Professional General Artist
I love this place. :D
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:iconjonuriah:
JonUriah Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2015  Professional Photographer
The Noah "Bud" Ogle homestead is one of my favorites. :)
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slowdog294 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015  Professional General Artist
It is a classy little cabin, indeed. Also, it is located in a very peaceful place...
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Crappy-Artist-Guy Featured By Owner Edited Mar 12, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
;3 The story helps but IMO the viewer should decide their own back-story/moment.

Gr8 job 2, I like it.
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JonUriah Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2015  Professional Photographer
Thank you!
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Crappy-Artist-Guy Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
You are certainly welcome.
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Pitsh Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2015   Digital Artist
I'd move in! :)
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chocopirate Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2015
reminds me of cabin in the woods. DUN DUN DUN
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HeartOfDeath Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014  Professional Filmographer
You amaze me.
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:iconjonuriah:
JonUriah Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015  Professional Photographer
Thank you!
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Santosbzz Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2014
Muy bueno!
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:iconjonuriah:
JonUriah Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014  Professional Photographer
Thank you!
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Amarantheans Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2014
This is a moment frozen in time. The stacked stone chimney is amazing. I could really see such a shot from the 1800s just with a little less color. :)
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JonUriah Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2014  Professional Photographer
Thank you!
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Amarantheans Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2014
You are welcome :)
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OcioProduction Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart:
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LaviniaChu Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lovely capture, and the setting is really nice Heart 
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JonUriah Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014  Professional Photographer
Thank you!
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LaviniaChu Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
much welcome ^^
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Prepare-Your-Bladder Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very beautiful shot!
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JonUriah Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014  Professional Photographer
Thank you!
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Ichiginryu Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
This photography is magical, when I see it, I can fly to the mountain and another site and year, very good photo :")!
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JonUriah Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2014  Professional Photographer
Thank you!
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spottedhorse567 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Student Digital Artist
this is a beautiful cabin that is just awinspiring lovely photo!!!
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JonUriah Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Professional Photographer
Thank you!
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heidi137 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Superb this cabinHeart 
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